Love II: 2

Left (Tie).

いざさらば生田の杜に祈りみん頼む方なき戀の病を

iza saraba
ikuta no mori ni
inorimin
tanomu kata naki
koi no yamai o
So, now,
To the sacred grove of Ikuta
Shall I go to pray
For this hopeless
Love’s sickness…

Lord Kanemune.

663

Right.

あはれとも思もやする我戀をなげきの杜の神に祈らん

aware tomo
omoi mo ya suru
wa ga koi o
nageki no mori no
kami ni inoruran
Pitiful
Do you think me?
So, the grief of love
Will I burn in Nageki’s sacred grove
As an offering…

The Provisional Master of the Empress Household Office.

664

The Gentlemen of the Left and Right have nothing particular to say.

Shunzei’s judgement: the Left’s ‘so, now’ (iza saraba) seems pleasant. The Right’s poem has a fairly direct style. After comparison, this is a tie again.

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