Sumiyoshi-sha uta’awase kaō ni-nen 50

Round Twenty-Five

Left

うちしぐれものさびしかるあしのやのこやのねざめにみやここひしも

uchishigure
mono sabishikaru
ashi no ya no
koya no nezame ni
miyako koishi mo
A slight shower is
All the more lonely
In a reed-roofed
Hut in Koya, starting awake and
Longing for the capital more…

Lord Sanesada
99

Right

あはれにもよはにすぐなるしぐれかななれもやたびのそらにいでつる

aware ni mo
yowa ni sugu naru
shigure kana
nare mo ya tabi no
sora ni idetsuru
How sad is
At midnight a passing
Shower!
Have you, too, on a journey
Into the skies departed?

Lord Toshinari
100

The configuration of the Left’s poem, beginning with ‘All the more lonely’ and concluding with ‘Longing for the capital more’, has already penetrated the boundaries of mystery and depth. It sounds particularly pleasant. The poem of the Right is the judge’s own meagre work. Thus, in accordance with precedent I shall refrain from rendering a judgement.

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