Round Twenty-Eight

Left

わぎもこをかたまつよひの秋風はをぎのうはばをよきてふかなん

wagimoko o kata matsu yoi no akikaze wa ogi no uwaba o yokite fukanan

For my darling girl I wait filled with longing, tonight I would the autumn wind The cogon grass fronds Pass by in its blowing!

Shun’e
55

Right (Win)

朝夕におつる涙や恋草のしげみにすがる露と成るらん

asayū ni otsuru namida ya koigusa no shigemi ni sugaru tsuyu to naruran

Morn and eve My falling tears to Love’s grasses Lush do cling and Turn to dewdrops.

Atsuyori
56

The Right poem’s use of diction and expression has nothing wrong with it and is entirely appropriate.