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MYS XIV: 3477

安都麻道乃 手児乃欲婢佐可 古要弖伊奈婆 安礼波古非牟奈 能知波安比奴登母

あづまぢの てごのよびさか こえていなば あれはこひむな のちはあひぬとも

adumadi no
tego no yobisaka
koete inaba
are pa kopinamu na
noti pa apinuru tomo
On eastland roads lies
Tego-no-Yobisaka:
When I pass across it,
How filled am I with yearning,
Even should we meet once more…

Kinkai wakashū 569

あづまぢのさやの中山こえていなばいとど都やとほざかりなん

azumaji no
saya no nakayama
koete inaba
itodo miyako ya
tōzakarinan
Upon eastland roads lies
Saya-no-Nakayama:
When I pass across it
How much the capital
Seems further away…[i]

569


[i] See: 安都麻道乃 手児乃欲婢佐可 古要弖伊奈婆 安礼波古非牟奈 能知波安比奴登母 azumaji no/ tego no yobisaka / koete inaba / are wa koinamu na / nochi wa ainuru tomo ‘On eastland roads lies / Tego-no-Yobisaka: / When I pass across it, / How filled am I with yearning, / Even should we meet once more…’ (Man’yōshū XIV: 3477)

Kanpyō no ōntoki chūgū uta’awase 17

Round Seventeen

Left

東路のさやの中山なかなかに見えぬものからこひしかるらん

azumaji no
saya no nakayama
nakanaka ni
mienu mono kara
koishikaruran
On eastern roads lies
Saya no Nakayama:
I really
Cannot see it at all, so
I seem to love it all the more…

32

Right

This poem is missing from the surviving texts of the contest.

Love X: 9

Left
うかれめの浮かれて歩く旅やかた住みつきがたき恋もする哉

ukareme no
ukarete ariku
tabiyakata
sumitsukigataki
koi mo suru kana
Player girls do
Drift around
The inn-houses;
As unsettled
Is the love they make…

Lord Suetsune
1157

Right (Win)
東路やゆききの人にうちとけて宿かりそめの契すらしも

azumaji ya
yukiki no hito ni
uchitokete
yado karisome no
chigiri sura shimo
Along the Eastern Roads
Folk go back and forth, and
To relieve them, the girls
Find brief lodging and even make brief
Vows of love…

The Supernumerary Master of the Empress’ Household Office
1158

The Right state: the Left’s poem has no matters we can criticize. The Left state: the conception of Love in the Right’s poem is vague.

In judgement: The Left’s poem seem certainly to capture the conceptions of both Love and player-girls. ‘Even’ (sura shimo) in the Right’s final section, sounds rather abrupt and portentous, but the initial section is certainly elegant. Thus, the Right should win.