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Dairi kiku awase – Engi jūsan-nen 01

Poems from a Chrysanthemum Match held by the Senior Courtier Gentlemen in the presence of His Majesty, 13th day of the Tenth Month, Engi 13.


Left

ちりはててはななきときのはななればうつろふいろのをしくもあるかな

chirihatete
hakanaki toki no
hana nareba
utsurou iro no
oshiku mo aru kana
All scattered now,
For such a brief time are
These flowers here;
The fading of their hues
Is something I regret!

Okikaze
1

しらくものうへにしうつるきくなればいたくをにほへはなとみるべく

shiraku mo no
uenishi utsuru
kiku nareba
itaku o nioe
hana to mirubeku
A white cloud,
Planted is this gleaming
Chrysanthemum, so
Bright, indeed, shining
Does the bloom look to be…

Suetada[i]
2

あきすぎてはなざかりなるきくのはないろにたぐひてあきやかへれる

aki sugite
hanazakari naru
kiku no hana
iro ni taguite
aki ya kaereru
Autumn is past and
The flowers richly blooming are
Chrysanthemums:
With their hues
Autumn does return!

Korenori
3

なみとのみうちこそみゆれすみのえのきしにのこれるしらぎくのはな

nami to nomi
uchi koso miyure
suminoe no
kishi ni nokoreru
shiragiku no hana
Simply as waves
Do they, indeed, appear!
At Suminoe
Lingering on the shore
White chrysanthemum blooms.

Korenori
4

わぎもこがひもゆふぐれのきくなればあかずぞはなのいろはみえける

wagimoko ga
hi mo yūgure no
kiku nareba
akazu zo hana no
iro wa miekeru
My darling girl
Both day and eve is
As a chrysanthemum, so
Never sated am I with this flower’s
Hues I see.

Korenori
5

きくのはなふゆののかぜにちりもせでけふまでとてやしもはおくらん

kiku no hana
fuyu no kaze ni
chiri mo sede
kyō made tote ya
shimo wa okuran
Chrysanthemum blooms
In the winter wind
Scatter not;
Is it that up to today is when
Frost is said to fall?

Korenori
6

かげさへやこよひはにほふきくのはなあまてるつきにかのそはるらん

kage sae ya
koyoi wa niou
kiku no hana
ama teru tsuki ni
ka no sowaruran
Even their shape
Fills tonight with a scented glow;
Chrysanthemum blooms
To the heaven-shining moon
Seem to add their fragrance.

Korenori
7


[i] Fujiwara no Suetada/Suenawa 藤原季縄 (?-919). Little is known of Suetada’s life, other than that he was apparently close to Ise 伊勢 and exchanged poems with her. The circumstances of his death, however, are recorded in Yamato monogatari, which relates that he fell ill in Engi 19 (919) when he held the position of Minor Captain in the Inner Palace Guards, Right Division (Ukonoe shōshō右近衛少将). On a day when he was due to be in attendance at the palace, he sent a message to Minamoto no Kintada 源公忠 (889-948), a Chamberlain and the Assistant Director of the Bureau of Housekeeping, to say that illness prevented his being there. Kintada replied that he should attend without fail on the day after tomorrow, but when that day came, Suetada sent him the following poem:

くやしくぞ のちにあはむと 契りける 今日をかぎりと 言はましものを

kuyashiku zo
nochi ni awamu to
chigirikeru
kyō o kagiri to
iwamashi mono o
I am struck with bitterness!
Once more would we meet
Did I vow, but
Today I meet my end—
That is what I would say…

SKKS VIII: 854

Concerned, Kintada ordered up a carriage and went immediately to Suetada’s residence, only to find he had died before he arrived. Greatly downcast, he returned to the palace and reported Suetada’s death to the emperor.

KYS IX: 518

Composed when viewing the blossom at the Enshūji and recalling former Emperor Gosanjō.

うゑおきしきみもなきよにとしへたる花は我が身のここちこそすれ

ueokishi
kimi mo naki yo ni
toshi hetaru
hana wa wa ga mi no
kokochi koso sure
You planted them here,
My Lord, though gone from this world,
These many years past—
The flowers and my sorry self
Both feel the same…

The Third Prince
三の宮

Sumiyoshi-sha uta’awase kaō ni-nen 52

Round Two

Left (Tie)

すみよしときこゆるさとにいとはずはおきどころなきみをやどさばや

sumiyoshi to
kikoyuru sato ni
itowazu wa
okidokoro naki
mi o yadosaba ya
A pleasant place to live is Sumiyoshi’s
Estate, or so I’ve heard, but
If it provide no comfort, then
My restless
Self might it attract…

Lord Kinshige
103

Right

すぎていにしあきにおくれてしもがるるきくやわがみのたぐひなるらむ

sugite inishi
aki ni okurete
shimogaruru
kiku ya wa ga mi no
tagui naruramu
Past and gone is
Autumn, but lingering,
Frost-burned
Chrysanthemums—is my sorry self
Just like them, I wonder?

Enjitsu
104

Neither the poem of the Left, nor of the Right, sound as if they have any particular faults. Nevertheless, in the case of such poems the assessment varies depending upon the speaker. While the poem of the Left is, indeed, pitiful, it also sounds a bit crude. It would be elegant, I think, if it were a woman’s poem. As for the Right’s poem, if we take it as an expression of grief over orphanhood, then in the final analysis it’s charming as it matches the conception of a scion of a noble house picturing himself as the monarch of the flowers. Then again, we do have the poem by the Enkyū Third Prince:

うゑおきしきみもなきよにとしへたる花は我が身のここちこそすれ

ueokishi
kimi mo naki yo ni
toshi hetaru
hana wa wa ga mi no
kokochi koso sure
You planted them here,
My Lord, though gone from this world,
These many years past—
The flowers and my sorry self
Both feel the same…[1]

This would seem to be in the same vein. Given that the speaker of both poems is unclear, for the moment, these tie.


[1] Composed when viewing the blossom at the Enshūji and recalling former Emperor Gosanjō (KYS IX: 518).

Daikōtaigōgū no suke taira no tsunemori-ason ke uta’awase 11

Round Eleven

Left (Win)

われこそは野べをば宿にうつしつれたがさそひこし虫の音ぞこは

ware koso wa
nobe oba yado ni
utsushitsure
ta ga sasoikoshi
mushi no nezoko wa
‘Twas I, indeed, who
The meadow to my dwelling
Shifted, but
Who is it has been invited here
By the insects’ songs?

Shun’e Tayū no kimi
21

Right

秋の野の千くさの花の色色を心ひとつにそめてこそみれ

aki no no no
chikusa no hana no
iroiro o
kokoro hitotsu ni
somete koso mire
The autumn meadows
Thousand grasses’ blooms
Have hues a’plenty, but
My heart, but one,
Has been dyed, you see!

Mikawa, Court Lady to His Excellency
22

The Left sounds as if the poet is being comforted by the insects which is at some variance from the essential meaning of the topic, and yet when I listen to it, it has an abundance of charm. The Right doesn’t differ, does it, from Kanemasa’s poem in the Poetry Match held at the Residence of the Minister of the Centre in Gen’ei 2 [1119]:

秋くれば千くさに匂ふ花の色の心ひとつにいかでしむらん

aki kureba
chikusa ni niou
hana no iro no
kokoro hitotsu ni
ikade shimuran
When the autumn comes
The thousand grasses glow
With flowers’ hues, but
Why, then, does my heart with but one
Seem to be stained?

Thus, the Left wins.

Daikōtaigōgū no suke taira no tsunemori-ason ke uta’awase 05

Round Five

Left

あきののは花の色色おほかれど萩のにしきにしく物ぞなき

aki no no wa
hana no iroiro
ōkaredo
hagi no nishiki ni
shiku mono zo naki
In the autumn meadows
The blooms have hues
Aplenty, yet
To the bush-clover’s brocade
There’s nothing to compare.

Lord Fujiwara no Yorisuke, Assistant Master of the Empress Dowager’s Household Office
9

Right (Win)

ほりはてぬ花こそあらめ秋ののに心をさへものこしつるかな

horihatenu
hana koso arame
aki no no ni
kokoro o sae mo
nokoshitsuru kana
As yet undug
Flowers, indeed, may there be
In the autumn meadows, for
Even my heart
Does linger there!

Lord Minamoto no Yorimasa, Former Director of the Bureau of Military Storehouses
10

The Left seems a bit cliched, yet it’s not bad. As for the Right, the image of having dug up all the flowers is unsatisfying, yet it’s not worth drawing attention to when the whole sentiment is so charming, and thus the Right should win.

Daikōtaigōgū no suke taira no tsunemori-ason ke uta’awase 01

Round One

Blossom and Grasses

Left (Tie)   

色とこそ萩が花ずりおもひしか香さへ袂にうつりぬるかな

iro to koso
hagi ga hanazuri
omoishika
ka sae tamoto ni
utsurinuru kana
With hues, indeed,
Are the bush-clover blooms dyed
Did I think, but
Even the scent to my sleeves
Has shifted!

Lord Fujiwara no Shige’ie, Minister of Justice
1

Right

あきの野にいづれともなき花なれどまねく薄ぞ先めにはたつ

aki no no ni
izure to mo naki
hana naredo
maneku susuki zo
saki me ni wa tatsu
In the autumn meadows
All equally fine
Are the flowers, yet
It is the beckoning silver grass that
First catches the eye!

Former Minor Counsellor Fujiwara no Suketaka
2

On perusing the poems of Left and Right, it is not the case that neither has any elements lacking feeling. With that being said, the initial section of the Left’s poem and the final section of the right are not laudable, so after some little thought and being confused by the Left and the Right, reluctantly, I have decided to make this a tie.

Daikōtaigōgū daijin kiyosuke-ason ke uta’awase 22

Round Twenty-Two

Snow

Left (Win)

霜がれのまがきの中に雪ふれば菊より後の花もありけり

shimogare no
magaki no naka ni
yuki fureba
kiku yori nochi no
hana mo arikeri
When, burned by frost,
Within my lattice fence
There is a fall of snow,
After the chrysanthemums,
There are flowers, even so.

Suketaka
43

Right

花さけば雪かとみせて雪ふれば花かとみするみよしのの山

hana sakeba
yuki ka to misete
yuki fureba
hana ka to misuru
miyoshino no yama
When the blossom blooms
I wonder if ‘tis snow, and
When the snow does fall
I wonder if ‘tis blossom
In the mountains of fair Yoshino.

Kūnin
44

Both are elegant, but even so the Right should lose.