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Tōgū gakushi noritada uta’awase 07

The scent of orange blossom incense on the breeze[i]

Left

ふくかぜに花たちばなぞにほふなるむかしのそでにあやまたれつつ

fuku kaze ni
hanatachibana zo
niou naru
mukashi no sode ni
ayamataretsutsu
With the gusting breeze
Orange blossom’s
Fragrance comes—
For those sleeves of bygone days
Do I ever mistake it…

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Right

つねよりもことにもあるかなけふをまつはなたちばなのかぜのにほひは

tsune yori mo
koto ni mo aru kana
kyō o matsu
hanatachibana no
kaze no nioi wa
More than ever
So special it is!
For today have I awaited,
Orange blossom’s
Scented breeze…

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In general, orange blossom is scented during early summer showers or has its fragrance carried on the evening breeze, so I wonder about the folk of bygone days: there’s nothing to compare it with, making the Left’s poem as hackneyed as one on Isonokami, yet there’s nothing special about it, like a weed growing under the eaves. The Right’s poem has ‘for today have I awaited’, which I think requires a reference to sweet-flags. My overall impression of both poems is that their conceptions are unclear.

[Judge’s poem missing]


[i] Rōkitsu bōfū 盧橘芳風

Ōmi no miyasudokoro uta’awase 01

Topics

PlumWillowBlossoming CherryBird Cherry
ChinaberryTaiwan CherryGarden CherryPeach Blossom
Rock AzaleaMulberry BlossomSnowbell BlossomSmilax Blossom
MapleSand Pear BlossomFox WillowBudding Azalea
WaterweedKerria BloomsWisteria Blooms 

The event was held in the Lady of the Bedchamber’s private apartment, presenting poems on blossoms at the palace. Poems were not presented for the Right.

Plum

かをとめてをりこそしつれむめの花春の霞は立ちかくせども

ka o tomete
ori koso shitsure
mume no hana
haru no kasumi
wa tachikakusedomo
To hold their fragrance here,
Indeed, have I picked
Plum blossoms, though
The haze of spring
Arise to hide them from my sight…

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Daigo ōntoki kiku awase 05

いづこにかかをやどすらんきくのはな色をば霜にとどめおきつつ

izuko ni ka
ka o yadosuran
kiku no hana
iro oba shimo ni
todome’okitsutsu
Where is it that
Their fragrance will find lodging?
For the chrysanthemum blooms’
Hues by the frost’s
Fall have been ended…

Taira no Koremochi
9

うつろはぬさきにをりてもきくの花霜の心もうしろめたきに

utsurowanu
saki ni orite mo
kiku no hana
shimo no kokoro mo
ushirometaki ni
Yet unfaded,
Earlier were picked
These chrysanthemum blooms, for
The frost’s heart, too,
Cannot be trusted…

[Fujiwara no] Korehira
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Dairi kiku awase 03

わぎもこがひもゆふぐれのきくなればあかずぞはなのいろはみえける

wagimoko ga
hi mo yūgure no
kiku nareba
akazu zo hana no
iro wa miekeru
My darling girl
Both day and eve is
As a chrysanthemum, so
Never sated am I with this flower’s
Hues I see.

Korenori
5

きくのはなふゆののかぜにちりもせでけふまでとてやしもはおくらん

kiku no hana
fuyu no kaze ni
chiri mo sede
kyō made tote ya
shimo wa okuran
Chrysanthemum blooms
In the winter wind
Scatter not;
Is it that up to today is when
Frost is said to fall?

Korenori
6

かげさへやこよひはにほふきくのはなあまてるつきにかのそはるらん

kage sae ya
koyoi wa niou
kiku no hana
ama teru tsuki ni
ka no sowaruran
Even their shape
Fills tonight with a scented glow; Chrysanthemum blooms
To the heaven-shining moon
Seem to add their fragrance.

Korenori
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Kinkai wakashū 30

Plum blossom at an ancient estate.

年ふればやどはあれにけり梅のはな花はむかしの香ににほへども

toshi fureba
yado wa arenikeri
ume no hana
hana wa mukashi no
ka ni nioedomo
The years have passed, so
The house has into ruin fallen, yet
The plum’s blossoming
Flowers, as in days long gone
Scent the air with fragrance.

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A kuzushiji version of the poem's text.
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