From a poetry contest at Sadafun’s house.
みねはもえふもとはこほるふじ川のわれもうき世を住みぞわづらふ
mine Fa moe Fumoto Fa koForu FuzigaFa no ware mo ukiyo wo sumi zo waduraFu At the peak it burns and At the foot does freeze: The Fuji River, just as I, too, in this cruel world Live and suffer.
Fukayabu
This is the sole surviving poem from ‘Sadafumi’s Poetry Contest ‘.
Left.
年月ぞ思かひなく過にける君をきませの山のふもとに
toshitsuki zo
omou kainaku
suginikeru
kimi o kimase no
yama no fumoto ni
For many years and months
I yearned to no end,
Passing time
Calling you on Kimase
Mountain’s foot.
Lord Suetsune .
967
Right (Win).
吉野山戀のあまりに思入ぬなかなかさらば人や訪ふとて
yoshinoyama
koi no amari ni
omoi’irinu
nakanaka saraba
hito ya tou tote
As Mount Yoshino
Is my love’s extent,
So deeply do I feel it;
But were I to do so,
Perhaps he would visit me there?
Nobusada .
968
Both Right and Left together state the opposing poem has no faults to indicate.
In judgement: in the Left’s poem, would it really be to no end to pass the time calling on Mount Kimase? The Right’s poem, on Mount Yoshino, has ‘but were I to do so’ (naka saraba ), which sounds charming. Thus, the Right wins.
Sent to the house of someone who had gone to Shinano.
月影は飽かず見るとも更級の山の麓に長居すな君
tukikage Fa
akazu miru tomo
sarasina no
yama no Fumoto ni
nagawisu na kimi
The moonlight can
Never sate your gaze, but
In Sarashina
At the mountain’s foot
Stay not too long, my lord!
Ki no Tsurayuki
紀貫之
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