natsugoromo tachi’izuru kyō wa hanazakura katami no iro mo nugi ya kauran
Summer garb: Cut out from today, departing The blossom of the cherries’ Hues—a keepsake—, too, Will I put off and change?
Nakatsukasa
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The Left’s poem gives the impression of the beginning of summer, but the Right’s ‘Sewn from today, departing’ suggests that it is the year that is doing so. In addition, it seems to use ‘put off and change’, and so sounds as if time has passed more swiftly than in the Left’s poem. Thus, because the poems’ quality is about the same, I make this a tie.
[1]Shuka 首夏. This Sinitic expression was also used to refer to the the Fourth Month.
Composed after I had met Dharma Eye Teinin,[i] and heard him tell the tale of Ōmine[ii] among other things.
おくやまの苔のころもに置く露は涙の雨のしづくなりけり
okuyama no koke no koromo ni oku tsuyu wa namida no ame no shizuku narikeri
Deep within the mountains Upon his robe of moss The falling dewdrops are A rain of tear Droplets.
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[i] Teinin 定忍 has not been identified, but from the context here, he must have been a yamabushi 山伏, an itinerant Buddhist monk and practitioner of shugendō.
[ii] Ōmine 大峰 was a mountain in Yoshino in Yamato which was a major location for practitioners of the ascetic Buddhist practice of shugendō 修験道, which involved, among other things, ascending the mountain to increase one’s spiritual power.