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Naidaijin-ke uta’awase 35

Round Eleven

Left (T – Win; M – Tie)

逢ふことをその年月と契らねば命や恋の限なるらむ

au koto o
sono toshitsuki to
chigiraneba
inochi ya koi no
kagiri naruramu
That we might meet
For months and years
She has not promised, so
My life will my love’s
Limit be, no doubt!

Lord Shigemoto
69

Right

よとともにもえこそわたれ我が恋は不二の高根のけぶりならねど

yo to tomo ni
moe koso watare
wa ga koi wa
fuji no takane no
keburi naranedo
With the coming of the night
Ever burning is
My love, though
From Fuji’s peak
Smoke it is not…

Lord Toshitaka
70

Toshiyori states: the first poem doesn’t seem bad. The second poem nothing but cliched. Thus, the first poem should win.

Mototoshi states: while love lasting lifelong without even a promise to meet over years and months is a painfully moving conception, someone burning every night is dear, too. Thus, it’s not inferior and these are of the same quality.