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Dairi uta’awase – Tentoku yo-nen 15

Round Fifteen

Left (Win)

夏草のなかを露けみかき分けて刈る人なしにしげる野辺かな

natsu kusa no
naka o tsuyukemi
kakiwakete
karu hito nashi ni
shigeru nobe kana
The summer grasses
Midst is dew-drenched;
Forging through,
With no one to reap them
This meadow is lush, indeed!

Tadami
29

Right.

夏ふかくなりぞしにけるおほあらきの杜の下草なべて人かる

natsu fukaku
nari zo shinikeru
ōaraki no
mori no shitagusa
nabete hito karu
Deep within the summer
It is now:
At Ōaraki
In the sacred groves, the undergrowth
Is arrayed for men to reap it!

Kanemori
30

The Right poem’s ‘Is arrayed for men to reap it’ is poor. It is inferior to the poem of the Left. Thus, I make the Left the winner.