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Sumiyoshi-sha uta’awase kaō ni-nen 65

Round Fifteen

Left

わかのうらとおもふばかりをたのみにてやどもさだめぬあまのこぞうき

waka no ura to
omou bakari o
tanomi nite
yado mo sadamenu
ama no ko zo uki
At Waka Bay, for my youth
Simply do I long;
Relying on
A homeless
Son of fisherfolk is sad, indeed.

Kyō
129

Right (Win)

すみよしのまつことなくていたづらにとしはつもりのうらみをぞする

sumiyoshi no
matsu koto nakute
itazura ni
toshi wa tsumori no
urami o zo suru
At Sumiyoshi
Pine I do not, but
How quickly
The years have laid
Their despite upon me!

Suehiro
130

The Left, while it does sound truly pitiful, truly could have had something in mind as an outcome of youth at Waka Bay. As for the Right, simply that ‘The years have laid / Their despite’ without pining, I know only too well, so I can say that the Right wins.

Sumiyoshi-sha uta’awase kaō ni-nen 60

Round Ten

Left (Win)

かぞふればやとせへにけりあはれわがしづみしことはきのふとおもふに

kasoureba
yatose henikeri
aware wa ga
shizumishi koto wa
kinō to omou ni
When I count them up,
Many years have passed, but
Sadness
Overcomes me for the events
Of yesterday, I feel…

Lord Sanesada
119

Right

いたづらにふりぬるみをもすみよしのまつはさりともあはれしるらむ

itazura ni
furinuru mi o mo
sumiyoshi no
matsu wa sari tomo
aware shiruramu
How quickly
Age has come upon my flesh, too—
Sumiyoshi’s
Pines must that
Sadness know too well…

Lord Toshinari
120

The poem of the Left: these are not matters which could be understood by just anyone, yet even a superficial glance at it reveals that its conception and configuration display and exceptional sadness. How true it is that off all the myriad things in our lives it is the events of yesterday and today that we recall, and this is how we pass through the years and months, so how difficult, indeed, it is to supress the configuration of ‘When I count them up, / Many years have passed’! As for the Right’s poem, well, the conception of the initial section is pedestrian at best, although the latter section does seem to have some conception to it in places and shows some signs of thought. It is the poor composition of the judge, who is into his dotage. Once more, therefore, I have not rendered judgement, however, I feel that the deity would determine in favour of the Left.