Round Thirty-Four

Left

世のうさに秋の心のふかければおつる涙ももみぢしにけり

yo no usa ni aki no kokoro no fukakereba otsuru namida mo momijishinikeri

With the cruelty of this world, In autumn, my heart is full Down to its depths, so Even my dripping tears Have turned to scarlet hues.

Iemoto
67

Right (Win)

おもひでも又待つ事もなけれどもさすがに世こそすてもやられね

omoide mo mata matsu koto mo nakeredomo sasuga ni yo koso sute mo yararene

If I recall I still to await Have nothing at all, yet Even so, indeed, this world I am not ready to abandon!

Yūsei
68

Neither has anything wrong with it, yet the Right is superior.