Love II: 21

Left (Win).

菅薦の三編には我も寢たれども逢嬉さにしく物ぞなき

sugagomo no
mifu ni wa ware mo
netaredomo
au ureshisa ni
shiku mono zo naki
Beneath sedge woven blankets
Three layers thick
Have I slept, yet
To the joy of meeting you
Nothing can compare!

Lord Kanemune

701

Right.

戀々てあひみる夜半ぞまさりける人の心の知らまほしさに

koigoite
aimiru yow azo
masarikeru
hito no kokoro no
shiramahoshisa ni
Long has our love been and
Now we meet, at last;
In the midst of this night
How great are her feelings –
That’s what I would know!

Ietaka

702

Left and Right both say their opponent’s poem expresses the truth of the matter.

Shunzei’s judgement: the Left’s poem, in addition to drawing upon earlier work, seems technically accomplished. The Right’s poem does express a form of truth, yet would one really wish to know so much? The Left wins.

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