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Yasuakira shinnō tachihaki no jin uta’awase 07

Mist

Left (Tie)

うすしともみゆるものからさほやまのみねのあきぎりあきたちにけり

usushi to mo
miyuru mono kara
saoyama no
mine no akigiri
aki tachinikeri
Faint
Does it appear, so with
Mount Sao’s
Peak in autumn mists
Autumn has come!

Taira no Tōmi
13

Right

あさぎりはたつともみえずいとどしきをぐらのやまのふもととおもへば

asagiri wa
tatsu mo miezu
itodoshiki
ogura no yama no
fumoto to omoeba
The morning mists
Arise, and hidden
Even more are
Gloomy Mount Ogura’s
Foothills…

Taira no Sanenao
14

Daikōtaigōgū no suke taira no tsunemori-ason ke uta’awase 38

Round Two

Left (Win)

秋霧のたえまにみゆる紅葉ばやたちのこしたる錦なるらん

akigiri no
taema ni miyuru
momijiba ya
tachinokoshitaru
nishiki naruran
The autumn mists have
Gaps revealing
Scarlet leaves—
Remaining offcuts of
Brocade, perhaps?

Lord Tsunemori
75

Right

もみぢちる立田の山はえぞこえぬ錦をふまむ道をしらねば

momiji chiru
tatsuta no yama wa
e zo koenu
nishiki o fumamu
michi o shiraneba
Scattered with scarlet leaves
Tatsuta Mountain
I cannot cross, for
To tread upon a brocade
Path I know not how…

Lord Yorimasa
76

The Right is a poem on fallen leaves and blossom—something about which many people have composed in the recent past and modern times, too. The Left sounds as if it truly depicts things as they are. Its overall construction is lovely, too, so it should win.

Teishi-in ominaeshi uta’awase 17

たつたやまあきをみなへしすぐさねばおくるぬさこそもみぢなりけれ

tatsutayama
aki o mina heshi
sugusaneba
okuru nusa koso
momiji narikere
On Tatsuta Mountain
Autumn for all has
Not yet passed by, so
Proffered are garlands of
Scarlet leaves.

Motoyori
33

あきぎりをみなへしなびくふくかぜをこのひともとにはなはちるらし

akigiri o
mina heshi nabiku
fuku kaze o
kono hitomoto ni
hana wa chirurashi
The autumn mists
Have borne down on all
With the gusting wind
A single stalk of
Blooms seems to scatter…

Yoshikaze
34

Teishi-in ominaeshi uta’awase 07

Left

ひとのみることやくるしきをみなへしあきぎりにのみたちかくるらむ

hito no miru
koto ya kurushiki
ominaeshi
akigiri ni nomi
tachikakururamu
For man to gaze on you,
Is it so painful,
O, Maidenflower,
That simply in the autumn mists
You must hide yourself away?

Tadamine
13[1]

Right

とりてみばはかなからんやをみなへしそでにつつめるしらつゆのたま

torite miba
hakanakaran ya
ominaeshi
sode ni tsutsumeru
shiratsuyu no tama
If I pick and look
How fleeting are
Upon a maidenflower,
Enveloped in my sleeves
Silver dewdrop pearls.

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[1] KKS IV: 235