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Teiji’in tenjōbito uta’awase 08

Left (Tie)

あひ見むとおもひしよりもわかれてののちぞわびしきこひまさりけり

aimimu to
omoishi yori mo
wakarete no
nochi zo wabishiki
koimasarikeri
We would meet and see each other
I thought then, but then
We parted and
Later, filled with lonely sadness
Did I love you, even more.

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Right

あかでゆくひこぼしなればとしをへてわすれざりけるうれしげもなし

akade yuku
hikoboshi nareba
toshi o hete
wasurezarikeru
ureshige mo nashi
Unsatisfied goes
The Herd Boy, so
As the year passes by,
Unable to forget,
He shows no sign of joy.

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Teiji’in tenjōbito uta’awase 07

Left

わかれてののちやわびしきたなばたのあふごはるけきことをおもへば

wakarete no
nochi ya wabishiki
tanabata no
au go harukeki
koto o omoeba
They part, and
Later are filled with lonely sadness
The Weaver Maid’s
Time of meeting distant grows
Within her thoughts…

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Right (Win)

わかれてはわびしきものをひこぼしのきのふけふこそおもひやらるれ

wakarete wa
wabishiki mono o
hikoboshi no
kinō kyō koso
omoyararure
Parting is
Such a sad and lonely thing—
The Herd Boy,
Yesterday and today, too,
Dwells on it in his thoughts…

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Teiji’in tenjōbito uta’awase 06

Left

あふばかりうれしきものはなけれどもわかれてのちぞわびしかりける

au bakari
ureshiki mono wa
nakeredomo
wakarete nochi zo
wabishikarikeru
Simply meeting
A joyous thing
‘Tis not, yet
After having parted, indeed,
I am filled with lonely sorrow.

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Right (Win)

まれにあひてなにわかるらむひこぼしののちわびしとはしらずやあるらむ

mare ni aite
nani wakaruramu
hikoboshi no
nochi wabishi to wa
shirazu ya aruramu
Meeting but rarely,
For what should we part?
The Herd Boy’s
Later lonely sorrow
Shouldn’t you know?

12

Daikōtaigōgū daijin kiyosuke-ason ke uta’awase 13

Round Thirteen

Left (Tie)

ひこぼしのくれをまつまはあぢきなく雲のよそなる心ちこそせね

hikoboshi no
kure o matsu ma wa
ajikinaku
kumo no yoso naru
kokochi koso sene
While the Herd Boy
The evening awaits,
He suffers—
Beyond the distant clouds
Is where his feelings lie!

Taifu
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Right

さもこそは身はならはしといひながら七夕いかでたへてすぐらん

sa mo koso wa
mi wa narawashi to
iinagara
tanabata ikade
taete suguran
That is how it is—
Her flesh knows how it is,
They say, but
How is it that the Weaver Maid
Endures the passing days?

Kenshō

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In terms of overall quality, the Left is superior, but I am unable to understand it. The conclusion of the Right is non-standard.