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Reikeiden no nyōgo uta’awase 11

Love without meeting

Left (Win in a certain book)

かひもなきこひをのみしてよのなかにあはぬためしをわれやのこさむ

kai mo naki
koi o nomi shite
yo no naka ni
awanu tameshi o
ware ya nokosamu
Pointlessly
Yearning is all I do—
In this mundane world, that
We never meet: will that habit
Be all that is left to me?

Tadami

21[i]

Right (Win)

人をよにこひにこがるるわがみよりいくらのなみだここらいづらん

hito o yo ni
koi ni kogaruru
wagami yori
ikura no namida
kokora izuran
For her within the night
My yearning smoulders on, yet
From my sorry self
How many tears
Might burst out in floods?

22


[i] An almost identical poem is included in Saigū nyōgo kishi joō uta’awase (21).

Kawara no in uta’awase 05

Blossoming silver grass beckoning folk.[i]

Left

はなすすきまねくたもとのあまたあればゆきもやられずあきのののみち

hanasusuki
maneku tamoto no
amata areba
yuki mo yararezu
akino no michi
Of blossoming silver grass
Beckoning sleeves
Are there many, so
I can go no further on
The path across the autumn plains.

9

Right (Win)

はなすすきまねくたもとやたゆからんはかるのかぜにかへるひとなみ

hanasususki
maneku tamoto ya
tayukaran
hakaru nokaze ni
kaeru hito nami
Have the blossoming silver grass
Sleeves their beckoning
Ceased, perhaps? For with
The deceitful breeze across the plains
Returns not a single soul…

10


[i] 花薄招人

Dairi uta’awase – Tentoku yo-nen 14

Round Fourteen

Left (Tie)

さよふけてねざめざりせばほととぎす人づてにこそきくべかりけれ

sayo fukete
nezamezariseba
hototogisu
hitozute ni koso
kikubekarikere
When brief night broke, and
I failed to awaken to
The cuckoo,
Via a message, indeed,
Was I able to hear it!

Tadami
27

Right

人ならばまててふべきをほととぎすふたこゑとだにきかですぎぬる

hito naraba
mate chōbeki o
hototogisu
futa koe to dani
kikade suginuru
Were you a man,
‘Wait!’ is what I’d tell you,
O, cuckoo!
For without even a second call
For me to hear have you passed by.

Motozane
28

The Left’s poem, where the poet seems to awaken without a thought of hearing the cuckoo, is certainly somewhat odd. Nevertheless, the poem overall is charming. As for the Right’s poem, well, what is the poet trying to say by asking the cuckoo to wait when he will hear its first call, if it were a man? Is the conception, perhaps, for the cuckoo to wait a while? There’s not enough diction for the conception here, I feel. Both of these are about the same standard, so I make this a tie.

SIS XVI: 1015

When various people had come to see the blossom blooming beautifully at his mountain retreat in Kitashirakawa.

春きてぞ人もとひける山ざとは花こそやどのあるじなりけれ

Faru kite zo
Fito mo toFikeru
yamazato Fa
Fana koso yado no
aruzi narikere
Spring has come, and
Folk visiting, too,
My mountain retreat:
The blossoms are the dwelling’s
Master, to be sure!

Kintō, Captain of the Outer Palace Guards, Right Division