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Sumiyoshi-sha uta’awase kaō ni-nen 74

Round Twenty-Four

Left (Tie)

なにごとをまつとはなしにすみよしのかみにこころをかけぬまぞなき

nanigoto o
matsu to wa nashi ni
sumiyoshi no
kami ni kokoro o
kakenu ma zo naki
Nothing in particular
Have I to expect, but
Sumiyoshi’s
Deity within my heart
Dwells not for no moments at all!

Shōkaku
147

Right

いたづらにおいにけるかないにしへの人のうゑけむすぎならなくに

itazura ni
oinikeru naka
inishie no
hito no uekemu
sugi naranaku ni
How brief it’s been, but
I have grown old, though
By ancient
Folk a planted
Cedar tree I’m not…

Jakuchō
148

The conception of the Left’s poem, saying ‘Have I to expect, but’ sounds extremely charming, but the configuration of the poem of the Right, composing ‘Folk a planted / Cedar tree I’m not’ also appears pleasant. Thus, these tie.

Entō ōn’uta’awase 13

Round Thirteen

Left (Win)

桜花空にあまぎる白雲の棚引きわたるかづらきの山

sakurabana
sora ni amagiru
shirakumo no
tanabikiwataru
kazuragi no yama
The cherry blossoms,
As sky-sweeping
Clouds of white
Drape all across
Kazuragi Mountain.

Takasuke
25

Right

さくらさくながらの山のながき日も昔をこひぬ時のまぞなき

sakura saku
nagara no yama no
nagaki hi mo
mukashi o koinu
toki no ma zo naki
The cherries bloom
Changeless on Nagara Mountain;
The lengthy days to
Those beloved bygone
Moments do not compare.

Shimotsuke
26

Neither Left nor Right has any faults worth mentioning. The Right’s poem appears tranquil, with an artless quality. It has a moving sensibility of longing for the past, but the Left’s poem should just about win, I think.