Daikōtaigōgū daijin kiyosuke-ason ke uta’awase 24

Round Twenty-Four

Love

Left (Win)

恋しさのなぐさむ方やなからましつらき心をおもひませずは

koishisa no
nagusamu kata ya
nakaramashi
tsuraki kokoro o
omoimasezu wa
I wish my love for you
My consolation
Would be not—for then
Of your cold heart
I would not have to think…

Lord Kiyosuke
47

Right

君こずはうちへもいらじはらひつるねやのおもはむ事もはづかし

kimi kozu wa
uchi e mo iraji
haraitsuru
neya no omowamu
koto wa hazukashi
You have not come, so
I’ll not enter in—
Swept clean,
Thinking of my bedchamber
Is embarrassing, indeed!

Shun’e
48

Both are elegant, yet what comes after ‘within’ is not something which one would really feel, so I would say the Right loses.

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *