Autumn II: 14

Left.

あはれかな遠の山田にさ夜更けてはのかに引板の音斗する

aware kana
ochi no yamada ni
sayo fukete
honoka ni hita no
oto bakari suru
O, how sad!
From the distant mountain fields
As the night draws in
Comes faintly the bird-clapper’s
Sound, and nothing more…

Lord Suetsune.

387

Right (Win).

いづくより秋のあはれを誘ひ來て稲葉に風の吹續くらん

izuku yori
aki no aware o
sasoikite
inaba ni kaze no
fukutsuzukuran
Where is it from that,
Autumn sadness
Is invited in?
Over the rice-stems the wind
Blows on and on…

The Master of the Empress’ Household Office.

388

The Right state that they are left wondering why, by the first line of the Left’s poem. The Left have no criticisms of the Right’s poem.

Shunzei’s judgement: The Left faintly hears the sound of a bird clapper from distant mountain fields. The Right’s poem is a from a dwelling among the fields. Moreover, ‘blows on and on’ (fukitsuzuku) is forceful, indeed. It must win.

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