Round Twenty-Seven

Left

我が恋はすさの入江のこもり江のおもひこめても年をふるかな

wa ga koi wa susa no irie no komorie no omoikomete mo toshi o furu kana

My love is as Susa Inlet’s Hidden creeks: Ever filling my thoughts As the years pass by!

Masashige
53

Right (Win)

わが恋はおとなし河の浪なれやおもひかくれどきく人もなし

wa ga koi wa otonashigawa no nami nare ya omoikakuredo kiku hito mo nashi

Is my love As the River Silent’s Waves? Passion fills me, yet She never listens at all…

Atsuyori
54

The Right’s conception and diction are suitable and the overall impression is not bad at all.