Entō ōn’uta’awase 10

Round Ten

Left (Win)

数ならぬ深山がくれを尋ねてぞ心の末の花も見るべき

kazu naranu
miyamagakure o
tazunete zo
kokoro no sue no
hana mo mirubeki
Not for many, but
Hidden deep within the mountains,
I go seeking for
My heart’s final desire:
Catching sight of a blossom.

The Former Minister of the Centre
19

Right

まがひこし雲をばよそに吹きなして峰の桜ににほふ春風

magaikoshi
kumo o ba yoso ni
fukinashite
mine no sakura ni
niou harukaze
I had mistaken
The clouds far away
A’blowing, for
Cherries on the peaks
Scenting the breeze of spring.

Kozaishō
20

Both Left and Right sound elegant, yet still the hue of ‘my heart’s final desire: blossom’ is something I can visualise—thus, it wins.

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