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Kinkai wakashū 577

秋もはやすゑのはら野に鳴く鹿の声きく時ぞ旅はかなしき

aki mo haya
sue no harano ni
naku shika no
koe kiku toki zo
tabi wa kanashiki
Autumn swiftly ends
On the plain at Sue, where
Belling out, a stag’s
Cry I hear—‘tis then that
My travels are sad, indeed![i]

577


[i] An allusive variation on: 梓弓 末之腹野尓 鷹田為 君之弓食之 将絶跡念甕屋 azusayumi / sue no harano ni / togarisuru / kimi ga yuzuru no / taemu to omoe ya ‘A catalpa bow / On the plain at Sue / A’hawking— / As your bowstring, / I wonder: will I be able to endure?’ Anonymous (Man’yōshū XI: 2638); and: A poem from the poetry competition at Prince Koresada’s house. おく山に紅葉ふみわけなく鹿のこゑきく時ぞ秋は悲しき okuyama ni / momiji fumiwake / naku shika no / koe kiku toki zo / aki wa kanashiki ‘In the mountains’ heart / Forging through the autumn leaves, / A calling stag: / When I hear his voice I feel, / Autumn is sorrowful, indeed.’ Anonymous (Kokinshū IV: 215)

Entō ōn’uta’awase 21

Round Twenty-One

Left (Win)

しがらきの外山の末の郭公たが里ちかき初音なるらん

shigaraki no
toyama no sue no
hototogisu
ta ga sato chikaki
hatsune naruran
In Shigaraki
At the foothills’ end
A cuckoo
By whose estate
Might let out his first cry?

Takasuke
41

Right

橘のにほひを空に尋ねきて山時鳥なかぬ日ぞなき

tachibana no
nioi o sora ni
tazunekite
yamahototogisu
nakanu hi zo naki
Orange blossom’s familiar
Scent within the skies
I seek out, while
The mountain cuckoo
Fails to sing on not a single day…

Shimotsuke
42

The Left poem’s ‘near whose estate does it first call’ does not sound bad. The Right’s poem, too, seems to have no faults to mention, yet the Left still wins by a hair.

Entō ōn’uta’awase 10

Round Ten

Left (Win)

数ならぬ深山がくれを尋ねてぞ心の末の花も見るべき

kazu naranu
miyamagakure o
tazunete zo
kokoro no sue no
hana mo mirubeki
Not for many, but
Hidden deep within the mountains,
I go seeking for
My heart’s final desire:
Catching sight of a blossom.

The Former Minister of the Centre
19

Right

まがひこし雲をばよそに吹きなして峰の桜ににほふ春風

magaikoshi
kumo o ba yoso ni
fukinashite
mine no sakura ni
niou harukaze
I had mistaken
The clouds far away
A’blowing, for
Cherries on the peaks
Scenting the breeze of spring.

Kozaishō
20

Both Left and Right sound elegant, yet still the hue of ‘my heart’s final desire: blossom’ is something I can visualise—thus, it wins.

SKKS IV: 373

On the wind across the meadows, for the Poetry Match held at the Residence of the Hosshōji Lay Priest and Former Chancellor and Palace Minister.

たかまどののぢのしの原すゑさわぎそそや木がらしけふ吹きぬなり

takamado no
noji no shinohara
sue sawagi
soso ya kogarashi
kyō fukinu nari
At Takamado
Groves of dwarf bamboo by the roadside
Leaf-tips noisily
Rustling—O, the cold winter wind
Has begun to blow today.

Fujiwara no Mototoshi

A kuzushiji version of the poem's text.
Created with Soan.

SKKS XVIII: 1850

Topic unknown.

秋かぜになびくあさぢのすゑごとにおくしら露のあはれ世中

akikaze ni
nabiku asaji no
sue goto ni
oku shiratsuyu no
aware yo no naka
In the autumn breeze
The cogon grass trails back and forth;
On every single frond
Drop silver dewdrops—
So sad is this mundane world of ours.

Semimaru

A kuzushiji version of the poem's text.
Created with Soan.