Left.
我戀は涙の雨の世にふりて袖より外にあらはれにけり
| wa ga koi wa namida no ame no yo ni furite sode yori hoka ni arawarenikeri |
My love With a rain of tears Has filled the world, and In places other than my sleeves Has been revealed. |
729
Right (Win).
人知れぬ心のうちに染めし色も千入になれば隱れざりけり
| hito shirenu kokoro no uchi ni someshi iro mo chishio ni nareba kakurezarikeri |
Unknown to all Within my heart Stained with passion’s hues A thousand times over I could hide no longer! |
730
Left and Right both have nothing to say.
In judgement: the Left’s ‘in places other than my sleeves’ (sode yori hoka ni) is a little old-fashioned. It does not win over the Right’s ‘thousand times’