Original
あきやまはからくれなゐになりにけりいくしほしぐれふりてそめけむ
akiyama wa karakurenai ni narinikeri iku shio shigure furite somekemu The autumn mountains To Cathay scarlet Have turned; How many dippings with drizzle Have fallen to dye them so?
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しぐれつつくれなゐふかくやまのはもあきはてゆけばかひなかりけり
shiguretsutsu kurenai fukaku yama no ha mo aki hateyukeba kainakarikeri With every shower The scarlet deepens Of the leaves upon the mountain— With autumn reaching its ending How pointless that is…
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Right
いくしほもしぐれはふらじさほひめのふかくそめたるいろとこそみれ
iku shio mo shigure wa furaji saohime no fukaku sometaru iro to koso mire No matter how many dippings With drizzle fall, Princess Sao’s Deeply dyed Hues we see!
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The End of Autumn
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あきやまはからくれなゐになりにけりいくしほしぐれふりてそめけむ
akiyama wa karakurenai ni narinikeri iku shioshigure furitesomekemu The autumn mountains To Cathay scarlet Have turned; How many dippings with drizzle Have fallen to dye them so?
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Right (Win)
さほやまのははそのもみぢうすけれどあきはふかくもなりにけるかな
saoyama no hahaso no momiji usukeredo aki wa fukaku mo narinikeru kana On Sao Mountain The oak trees autumn leaves Are pale in hue, yet Most deep has autumn Become!
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Autumn
Round Seven
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秋山はからくれなゐに成りにけりいくしほしぐれふりてそめけん
akiyama wa karakurenai ni narinikeri iku shio shigure furite someken The autumn mountains To Cathay scarlet Have turned; How many dippings with drizzle Have fallen to dye them so?
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Right (Win)
秋きぬとめにはさやかにみえねども風の音にぞおどろかれぬる
aki kinu to me ni wa sayaka ni mienedomo kaze no oto ni zo odorokarenuru That autumn has come With my eyes, clearly, I cannot see, yet The sound of the wind Has startled me.
Fujiwara no Toshiyuki 14[2]
[1] Shokugosenshū VII: 429
[2] This poem was particularly highly evaluated and so is included in numerous other anthologies (Kokin rokujō I: 125), exemplary collections (Shinsen waka 2) and senka awase – contests assembled from prior poems (Shunzei sanjū roku nin uta’awase 61; Jidai fudō uta’awase 49).
Scarlet leaves dyed with dew (露染紅葉)
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白露のそむる紅葉のいかなればから紅にふかくみゆらん
shiratsuyu no somuru momiji no ikanareba karakurenai ni fukaku miyuran When silver dewdrops Stain the autumn leaves What happens, but Their scarlet hues Seem all the deeper.
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いかにおくしら露なれば紅葉ばのくれなゐふかく色をそむらん
ika ni oku shiratsuyu nareba momijiba no kurenai fukaku iro o somuran How can they fall— These silver dewdrops—so The autumn leaves with Ever deeper scarlet Hues are dyed?
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'Simply moving and elegant'