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Kinkai wakashū 631

The moon above the shrine.[i]

月のすむ北野のみやの小松原いく代をかけて神さびにけん

tsuki no sumu
kitano no miya no
komatsubara
ikuyo o kakete
kamisabiniken
So clear the moon above
Kitano Shrine’s[ii]
Dwarf pine groves—
Through how many ages
Might they have been venerated?[iii]

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[i] The topic here, ‘the moon over the shrine’ (shatō no tsuki 社頭月) was a standard one which could be applied to any poem on this theme, but poets usually had a specific shrine in mind when using it—that is, their poems were intended to describe a specific scene rather than a generic one. Sometimes the context would be supplied by the time and place in which the poem was composed: for example, this is one of the topics used in the Sumiyoshi-sha uta’awase kaō ni-nen (‘Sumiyoshi Shrine Poetry Match – Kaō 2’) held in 1170, so all the poems on it can be understood as describing the moon over Sumiyoshi Grand Shrine. Alternatively, the poet could refer to the shrine in the poem itself, as Sanetomo does here.

[ii] This is Kitano Tenmangū 北野天満宮 in the north of Kyoto, dedicated to Sugawara no Michizane 菅原道真 (845-903), as the deity of learning, Tenman Tenjin 天満天神.

[iii] See: 和我伊能知乎 奈我刀能之麻能 小松原 伊久与乎倍弖加 可武佐備和多流 wa ga inochi / nagato no shima no / komatsubara / ikuyo o hete ka / kamusabiwataru ‘My life! / Upon the isle of Nagato / The dwarf pine groves / Have through how many ages passed? / Ever venerable…’ (Man’yōshū XV: 3621)

MYS XV: 3621

和我伊能知乎 奈我刀能之麻能 小松原 伊久与乎倍弖加 可武佐備和多流

わがいのちを ながとのしまの こまつばら いくよをへてか かむさびわたる

wa ga inocti
nagato no sima no
komatubara
ikuyo wo pete ka
kamusabiwataru
My life!
Upon the isle of Nagato
The dwarf pine groves
Have through how many ages passed?
Ever venerable…

Anonymous

Eien narabō uta’awase 33

Round Five

Left

君がよはながゐのうらのはまかぜにたつしらなみのかずもしられず

kimi ga yo wa
nagai no ura no
hamakaze ni
tatsu shiranami no
kazu mo shirarezu
My Lord’s reign:
At Nagai Bay
The beach breezes
Rouse the whitecaps
In number entirely unknown.

Controller’s Graduate
65

Right

きみがよをまつちのやまのこまつばらちよのけしきを見るぞうれしき

kimi ga yo o
matsuchi no yama no
komatsubara
chiyo no keshiki o
miru zo ureshiki
My Lord’s reign
Awaiting upon Matsuchi Mountain
The pine seedling groves
The sight for a thousand ages
Joyfully will see!

Kerin’in Graduate
66

It’s impossible to decide on a winner or loser between the Left and the Right here in terms of conception, diction and overall style. To put it in general terms, I must make this round a further tie.

Neither Left nor Right is remarkable, but nor do they have any faults to mention. I’d make this round a tie.