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Sen’yōden no nyōgo nadeshiko awase 03

Left

たづのすむはまべににほふとこなつはいとどのどけきかげぞみえける

tazu no sumu
hamabe ni niou
tokonatsu wa
itodo nodokeki
kage zo miekeru
Cranes dwell
On the beach where ever glow
The pinks—
How tranquil it is
To see their shapes!

5[i]

Right (Win)

やまがつのかきほながらにうつしうゑていつとなくみむとこなつのはな

yamagatsu no
kakio nagara ni
utsushi uete
itsu to naku mimu
tokonatsu no hana
Even by a woodcutter’s
Brushwood fence
Should they be transplanted
Always would I gaze upon
Bedded pinks in bloom…

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[i] This poem is included in Fubokushō (IX: 3460), attributed to Nakatsukasa, with the headnote ‘Poetry Match held by Junior Consort Yoshiko (Hōshi) in the Fifth Month, Tenryaku 10’.  In some texts of the match, there is a minor variation in the wording of the final line, having iro (‘hues’), instead of kage (‘shapes’) as here.

Kinkai wakashū 557

On ‘And how I long to see the woodcutter’s…’[i]

山がつのかきほにさけるなでしこのはなの心をしる人のなさ

yamagatsu no
kakio ni sakeru
nadeshiko no
hana no kokoro o
shiru hito no nasa
By the woodcutter’s
Lattice fence has bloomed
A pink—
A flower’s heart:
There’s no one can understand!

557


[i] Topic unknown. あなこひし今も見てしか山がつのかきほにさける山となでしこ ana koishi / ima mo miteshika / yamagatsu no / kakio ni sakeru / yamato nadeshiko ‘O, how sweet! / And how I long to see / The woodcutter’s / Lattice fence, where blooms / My darling Yamato pink!’ Anonymous (KKS XIV: 695)