Category Archives: Gosenshū

GSS III: 117

After a man who was of a mind to become a monk had travelled to Yamato province and been there for some time, when a lady whom he had known before sent to him, enquiring how the cherry blossoms had been blooming lately.

みよし野の吉野の山の桜花白雲とのみ見えまがひつゝ

miyosino no
yosino no yama no
sakurabana
sirakumo to nomi
miemagaFitutu
In fair Yoshino
On Yoshino mountain,
The cherry blossom
Simply for clouds of white
I do always mistake!

Anonymous

GSS III: 89

A woman who lived in a rather dilapidated place, when she was feeling alone, picked some violets from her garden and sent them to a man saying:

我が宿にすみれの花の多かれば来宿る人やあると待つかな

a ga yado ni
sumire no Fana no
oFokareba
kiyadoru Fito ya
aru to matu kana
At my home
The violets bloom
In profusion, so
Wondering if you will come to stay
I am awaiting!

Anonymous

GSS XIII: 916

Sent to a woman without much sentiment, when he had not visited her for a long time:

伊勢の海のあまのまてかたいとまなみながらへにける身をぞ恨むる

ise no umi no
ama no madekata
itoma nami
nagaraFenikeru
mi wozo uramuru
By the sea at Ise
A diver-girl does work
Without surcease
Endlessly
I hate myself!

Minamoto no Hide’aki

The latest scholarship suggests that the expression should be read madekata (classical Japanese was written without voicing indicators, so there was no orthographic distiction between te and de – both would have been written て) and utilises a Man’yō expression meaning ‘left and right’ referring to the constant side-to-side movement of the ama girls’ hands and shoulders as they worked – hence the translation above – but it is unlikely that the Roppyaku-ban Uta’awase poets would have had this understanding of it. Matekata did not just cause controversy in this competition – it was discussed extensively in many other premodern critical works, none of which came to a definitive conclusion.