Love III: 16

Left.

さりともと待し月日も過ぬればこや絶え果つる始め成らん

saritomo to
machishi tsukihi mo
suginureba
ko ya taehatsuru
hajimenaruran
If it should be so,
That the days and months I’ve waited
Should come to pass,
Then, today, does our final parting
Start, it seems.

Lord Kanemune

751

Right.

いかにこはうとく成行く君ならん絶ゆべき程の契をやせし

ika ni ko wa
utokunariyuku
kimi naran
tayubeki hodo no
chigiri o ya seshi
How is it that
So far away
Are you?
That we should part –
Have we made such a vow?

The Provisional Master of the Empress Household Office

752

Both Right and Left state, we find nothing worth indicating in the other’s poem.

In judgement: the conception and diction of both poems is equivalent. They should tie.

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