Composed on spending spring accompanied by nothing but blossom.
ちらぬ間は花をともにて過ぎぬべし春よりのちのしる人もがな
tiranu ma Fa Fana wo tomo nite suginubesi Faru yori noti no siru Fito mogana While still unscattered The blossom is my only friend, and When ‘tis past And spring is gone, then Would I have folk to know!
The Hanazono Minister of the Left
Created with Soan .
Left (Tie)
やまざとにしるひともがなほととぎすなきぬときかばつげもくるがに
yamazato ni shiru hito mogana hototogisu nakinu to kikaba tsuge mo kuru gani At a mountain retreat, I would I had a friend, O, cuckoo, That on hearing your call, He would tell me so…
Okikaze
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Right
なつきぬとひとしもつげぬわがやどにやまほととぎすはやくなくなり
natsu kinu to hito shimo tsugenu wa ga yado ni yamahototogisu hayaku nakunari Summer has come—that Folk do tell; At my home A mountain cuckoo Gives an early call.
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Left 心ゆく野路の旅寝の友なくはいとど都や恋しからまし
kokoro yuku noji no tabine no tomo naku wa itodo miyako ya koishikaramashi To ease my heart While sleeping on my travels ‘tween the fields I have no friend at all, so How much more the capital Does seem dear to me now!
Lord Kanemune 1155
Right (Win) 立ち宿る一夜ばかりの契だにさてながらふる人もある世を
tachiyadoru hitoyo bakari no chigiri dani sate nagarauru hito mo aru yo o Lodging on one’s travels, For just a single night, A love That lasts with A lady does happen sometimes, yet…
Nobusada 1156
The Right state: the Left’s poem has no entertainers, or conception of love, either. The Left state: the Right’s poem lacks entertainers.
In judgement: it seems that the Gentlemen of both teams have already stated that both poems lack the conception of Love. However, they seem to me to both capture the conception of entertainers. The Right’s configuration and conception are fine. It should win, I think.
'Simply moving and elegant'