あし曳の山にすむてふ山がつの心もしらぬこひもするかな
ashihiki no yama ni sumu chō yamagatsu no kokoro mo shiranu koi mo suru kana In the leg-wearying
439
あし曳の山のをのへにかるかやのつかのまもなく乱れてぞおもふ
ashihiki no yama no onoe ni karu kaya no tsuka no ma mo naku midarete zo omou On the leg-wearying
425
あしびきの山よりおくにやどもがな年のくまじきかくれがにせむ
ashihiki no yama yori oku ni yado mogana toshi no kumajiki kakurega ni semu Deeper than the leg-wearying
397
足ひきのやまとびこゆる秋のかりいくへの霧をしのぎきぬらん
ashihiki no yama tobikoyuru aki no kari ikue no kiri o shinogikinuran Across the leg-wearying
あし曳のやまほととぎすみ山いでてよぶかき月のかげになくなり
ashihiki no yama hototogisu miyama idete yobukaki tsuki no kage ni naku nari Leg-wearying
From among my cuckoo poems.
足曳の山ほととぎすこがくれてめにこそみえね音のさやけき
ashihiki no yama hototogisu kogakurete me ni koso miene ne no sayakeki Leg-wearying,
夏ごろもたちし時よりあし曳の山ほととぎすなかぬ日ぞなき
natsugoromo tachishi toki yori ashihiki no yama hototogisu nakanu hi zo naki My summer garb
足引乃 山橘之 色出而 吾恋南雄 合難為名
asipiki no As the leg-wearying mountain
Anonymous
Composed on a plant.
紫 糸乎曽吾搓 足檜之 山橘乎 将貫跡念而
murasaki no Violet threads
Anonymous
Round 5
Left (Win)
朝日影まだ出でやらぬ足引の山はかすみの色ぞうつろふ
asahi kage mada ideyaranu ashihiki no yama wa kasumi no iro zo utsurou The morning sunlight
Takasuke, Gentleman-in-Waiting
Right
山姫のかすみのそでも紅に光そへたる朝日影かな
yamahime no kasumi no sode mo kurenai ni hikari soetaru asahi kage kana The mountain princess has
Shimotsuke
The Left’s poem has no faults worth pointing out; the poem of the Right’s ‘morning sunlight draping scarlet light across the sleeves of haze’ is overly gorgeous, I think, while the Left seems perfectly beautiful, so it should win.
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