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Daikōtaigōgū no suke taira no tsunemori-ason ke uta’awase 29

Round Five

Left

さやけさに又ことごともわすられてふた心なく月をこそみれ

sayakesa ni
mata kotogoto mo
wasurarete
futagokoro naku
tsuki o koso mire
In its pure clarity
Still, all other things
Are forgotten,
With no divisions in my heart
Do I view the moon!

Lord Suetsune
57

Right (Win)

いかで猶秋しも月のかかりけむみるほどあらじ夏のよならば

ikade nao
aki shimo tsuki no
kakarikemu
miru hodo araji
natsu no yo naraba
Why is it that always
In autumn, above all, the moon
Does seem to hang within the sky?
There’s no time to see it, perhaps,
On a summer night…

Lay Priest Sanekiyo
58

The Left’s configuration is entirely lacking in consistency and, in addition, fails to indicate a clear conception, so the Right must be declared the winner.

Kinkai wakashū 180

Autumn

Composed on the morning of the 1st day of the Seventh Month.

昨日こそ夏はくれしかあさ戸出の衣手さむし秋のはつかぜ

kinō koso
natsu wa kureshi ka
asa tode no
koromode samushi
aki no hatsukaze
Was it only yesterday that
Summer reached its end?
For stepping out my door this morning
My sleeves are chilled
By autumn’s first breeze…

Daikōtaigōgū no suke taira no tsunemori-ason ke uta’awase 15

Round Three

Left (Win)

たれよりも秋のあはれやまさるらん声にたてては鹿ぞ鳴くなる

tare yori mo
aki no aware ya
masaruran
koe ni tatete wa
shika zo nakunaru
Who might it be that
The sadness of autumn
Strikes more keenly?
Lifting up his voice,
It is the stag crying out!

Lord Yorisuke
29

Right

春夏はなにに心をなぐさめて秋のみ鹿の妻をこふらん

haru natsu wa
nani ni kokoro o
nagusamete
aki nomi shika no
tsuma o kouran
Spring and summer, too,
How do they the heart
Console?
‘Tis in autumn, alone, the stag
Seems to yearn for his mate.

Kenshō
30

The Left charmingly sounds as if the scene it describes is entirely natural. The Right isn’t bad, but, I seem to recall that there was a poem in—I think it was the Poetry Match at Lord Aritsuna’s Residence—that has the phrase ‘In autumn, above all, / The stag seems to yearn for his mate’, so it would have better to refrain from the final two lines. The Left should win.