kiewabinu utsurou hito no aki no iro ni mi o kogarashi no mori no shiratsuyu
I am too grieved to die! My fickle love showed me She’d had enough with autumn’s colours; Now, I yearn for her as the bitter wind Drenches the forest with silver dewfall.
[i] GSS X: 679/680: When he was sent a set of hunting robes from the residence of a woman he had been visiting secretly, he wrote this on the pattern of the hunting garb.
[i] GSS III: 102: Prince Motoyoshi lived with the daughter of Lord Kanemori, but she was summoned by the Cloistered Emperor and, while she was in service to him, he was unable to meet her, so at the beginning of the year in springtime, he took a branch of cherry blossom, and left it thrust through the doorway of her chamber.
[ii] An allusive variation on SIS XIII: 778, which appears as poem (3) in this contest.
[iii] SKKS V: 487: When he presented a Hundred Poem Sequence.
Prince Motoyoshi lived with the daughter of Lord Kanemori, but she was summoned by the Cloistered Emperor and, while she was in service to him, he was unable to meet her, so at the beginning of the year in springtime, he took a branch of cherry blossom, and left it thrust through the doorway of her chamber.
花のいろはむかしながらにみし人の心のみこそうつろひにけれ
Fana no iro Fa mukasi nagara ni misi Fito no kokoro nomi koso uturoFinikere
The hues of this blossom are Just as long ago, when She I saw them with has Her heart, indeed, Moved elsewhere!
[i] GSS IX: 515/516: When he didn’t know where she had gone, a man who wanted to get to know her again sent to her saying, ‘I’ve been worriedly enquiring about you for days-I thought you were dead!’
[ii] This poem is an allusive variation on a variant of KKS IV: 184, which appears in some Kokinshū manuscripts: Topic unknown. このまよりおちたる月の影見れば心づくしの秋はきにけり ko no ma yori / ochitaru tsuki no / kage mireba / kokorozukushi no / aki wa kinikeri ‘Between the trees / Dropped moon / Light, seeing it I know / Heart draining / Autumn, has come at last.’ Anonymous.