Left (Win).
身の憂きは思によらぬ世なれども君ばかりをばなをや恨みん
| mi no uki wa omou ni yoranu yo naredomo kimi bakari oba nao ya uramin |
My lot is sad: Nothing runs smooth In the world of love, yet Is it you, alone, That I now will hate? |
Lord Kanemune
765
Right.
今はまた我も心や変るらん恋しき人の恨めしきかな
| ima wa mata ware mo kokoro ya kawaruran koishiki hito no urameshiki kana |
Now, will again My heart Come to change? Will one who was dear, Become despised? |
Ietaka
766
Left and Right find no faults to indicate.
‘Will one who was dear become despised?’ (koishiki hito no urameshiki kana) is an extremely infantile expression. Thus, the Left wins.