天の河こぞの渡のうつろへばあさせふむまに夜ぞふけにける
| ama no kaFa kozo no watari no uturoFeba asase Fumu ma ni yo zo Fukenikeru | The River of Heaven’s Ferry pier since last year Has changed, so While I tread the bank, the shallows searching, The night has worn on! |
Round Ten
Left (Win)
一たびは風にちりにし紅葉ばをとなせの滝の猶おとすかな
| hitotabi wa kaze ni chirinishi momijiba o tonase no taki no nao otosu kana | Once Scattered by the wind Scarlet leaves Down the cateract at Tonase Fall once more! |
Arifusa
91
Right
色ふかき紅葉うつらぬ所こそ立田の川のあさせなりけれ
| iro fukaki momiji utsuranu tokoro koso tatsuta no kawa no asase narikere | Deep the hues of Scarlet leaves, reflected not In this place above all: The River Tatsuta’s Shallow rapids. |
Lay Priest Sanekiyo
92
The Left appears charming, but might have been slightly improved had it been composed about pleasure boating on the Ōi. As for the Right, it is erroneous to specify the shallow rapids as a place where scarlet leave are not reflected. Taken as a whole it is inferior.



