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Kanpyō no ōntoki chūgū uta’awase 6

Round Six

Left

夏山のみねのこずゑのたかければなく郭公こゑかはるかな

natsuyama no
mine no kozue no
takakereba
naku hototogisu
koe kawaru kana
The summer mountain
Peaks have treetops
So high, that
The crying cuckoo’s
Calls stand for them.

11

Right (Win)

おほあらきのもりの下草茂りあひてふかくも夏のなりにけるかな

ōaraki no
mori no shitagusa
moriaite
fukaku mo natsu no
narinikeru kana
In Ōaraki
Forest the undergrowth
Has grown so thick, that
Deep summer is
Surely here!

Mitsune
12

Dairi uta’awase – Tentoku yo-nen 15

Round Fifteen

Left (Win)

夏草のなかを露けみかき分けて刈る人なしにしげる野辺かな

natsu kusa no
naka o tsuyukemi
kakiwakete
karu hito nashi ni
shigeru nobe kana
The summer grasses
Midst is dew-drenched;
Forging through,
With no one to reap them
This meadow is lush, indeed!

Tadami
29

Right.

夏ふかくなりぞしにけるおほあらきの杜の下草なべて人かる

natsu fukaku
nari zo shinikeru
ōaraki no
mori no shitagusa
nabete hito karu
Deep within the summer
It is now:
At Ōaraki
In the sacred groves, the undergrowth
Is arrayed for men to reap it!

Kanemori
30

The Right poem’s ‘Is arrayed for men to reap it’ is poor. It is inferior to the poem of the Left. Thus, I make the Left the winner.