Entō ōn’uta’awase 37

Round Thirty-Seven

Left (Tie)

むば玉のよやふけぬらんさをしかの声すみのぼるをのの草ぶし

mubatama no
yo ya fukenuran
saoshika no
koe suminoboru
ono no kusabushi
Might lily-seed dark
Night have fallen?
The stag’s
Cry clearly climbs
From where he lies among the meadow grasses.

Takasuke
73

Right

秋のよはつまどふ鹿の深山出でていまだ旅なるをのの草ぶし

aki no yo wa
tsumadou shika no
miyama idete
imada tabi naru
ono no kusabushi
On an autumn night,
Seeking his bride, the stag
Emerges from the mountains’ depths,
And now on his travels
Lies among the meadow grasses.

Shimotsuke
74

Left and Right’s ‘lies among the meadow grasses’ have no merits or faults between them. A pleasant tie.

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