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Zōki-hōshi shū 5

I stayed by the beach at Fukiage. The moon was fair in the extreme, and the beach was a place where it was said that heavenly beings would often descend to and make merry. Truly, it was a fair place, indeed! That night, the sky was heart-rendingly moving, and as the night wore on, the breeze, brushing fallen frost from the ducks’ wing-feathers, brought loneliness to the skies, while the distant cries of cranes, calling for their comrades, was so moving, my words fail to express it. Birds other than these flocked, calling from the sandbars and even my insensitive and unfeeling self was moved beyond measure.

をとめごが天の羽衣ひきつれてむべもふけ井の浦におるらん

otomego ga
ama no hagoromo
hikitsurete
mube mo fukehi no
ura ni oruran
Heaven’s maidens’
Feathered robes,
Drawn up by
The gusts at Fukehi
Beach when they rest there.

Kinkai wakashū 466

三熊野のうらのはまゆふいはずとも思ふ心の数をしらなん

mikumano no
ura no hamayū
iwazu tomo
omou kokoro no
kazu o shiranan
At fair Kumano,
Lilies on the beach
Say nothing, yet
The yearnings in my heart for you
In number I would have you know![1]

466


[1] An allusive variation on: [One of] Four poems by Hitomaro, Lord Kakinomoto. み熊野の浦の濱木綿百重なす心は思へど直に逢はぬかも mikumano no / ura no hamayū / momoe nasu / kokoro wa omoedo / tada ni awanu kamo ‘At fair Kumano / Lilies on the beach / A hundred deep / My heart’s yearning, but / Never will we meet.’ (MYS IV: 496)

Sumiyoshi-sha uta’awase kaō ni-nen 48

Round Twenty-Three

Left (Win)

もしほぐさしきつのうらのねざめにはしぐれにのみやそではぬれける

moshiogusa
shikitsu no ura no
nezame ni wa
shigure ni nomi ya
sode wa nurekeru
Salt-seaweed grasses grow
On the beach at Shikitsu where
On waking is it
By the showers alone
That my sleeves have dampened?

Dharma Master Shun’e
95

Right

たびねにははにふのこやのいたびさししぐれのするぞさやにきこゆる

tabine ni wa
hanyū no koya no
itabisashi
shigure no suru zo
saya ni kikoyuru
Sleeping on my travels
On an ochre clay hut’s
Veranda boards
The falling of a shower
Sounds striking!

Lord Sanekuni
96

The Left’s ‘Salt-seaweed grasses grow / On the beach at Shikitsu’ is certainly particularly charming, and really what one should say. The concluding section’s ‘By the showers alone?’, too, does not seem simplistic in conception and diction. As for the Right, while it is not the case that at ‘an ochre clay hut’s…a shower..would sound striking’ has no point to it, the Left’s poem is particularly pleasant. Thus, it wins.