ささのはにあられさやぎてみ山辺は峰のこがらししきりてふきぬ
| sasa no ha ni arare sayagite miyamabe wa mine no kogarashi shikirite fukinu | The dwarf bamboo leaves Rustle with the hail, as Upon the distant mountainside The chill wind from the peak Blows on and on. |
350


Round Five
Left (Win)
くらゐやまみねのさくらをかざしても人はものをやなほおもふらむ
| kuraiyama mine no sakura o kazashitemo hito wa mono o ya nao omouramu | Even should I Mount Kurai’s Cherry blossom from the peak Wear in my hair, As a man would such gloomy Thoughts still fill me? |
Lord Sane’ie
109
Right
ありてこそあらぬすがたになりもせめうしとていかがみをばなぐべき
| arite koso aranu sugata ni nari mo seme ushi tote ikaga mi oba nagubeki | I live on, so My former state I have abandoned; How can I all the cruelties Cast from my flesh? |
Atsuyori
110
The Left’s configuration and conception are truly charming. The writer is troubled, isn’t he! In particular, the configuration of ‘As a man would such gloomy / Thoughts still fill me?’ sounds especially pleasant. For the Right, the tone of ‘How can I all the cruelties’ also seems pleasant, but still, I make the Left the winner.




Mist
Left (Tie)
うすしともみゆるものからさほやまのみねのあきぎりあきたちにけり
| usushi to mo miyuru mono kara saoyama no mine no akigiri aki tachinikeri | Faint Does it appear, so with Mount Sao’s Peak in autumn mists Autumn has come! |
Taira no Tōmi
13
Right
あさぎりはたつともみえずいとどしきをぐらのやまのふもととおもへば
| asagiri wa tatsu mo miezu itodoshiki ogura no yama no fumoto to omoeba | The morning mists Arise, and hidden Even more are Gloomy Mount Ogura’s Foothills… |
Taira no Sanenao
14
On a Day of the Rat, when Major Captain of the Right Sanesuke was lower in rank.
おいの世にかかるみゆきは有りきやとこだかき峯の松にとはばや
| oi no yo ni kakaru miyuki Fa ariki ya to kodakaki mine no matu ni toFaba ya | In ancient ages Did ever such a progress Occur? On the high, tree-covered peak I would ask the pines… |
’Kiyowara no Motosuke

Round Eleven
Left
さをしかの空にあはれときこゆるは山のたかねになけばなりけり
| saoshika no sora ni aware to kikoyuru wa yama no takane ni nakeba narikeri | A stag belling To the skies, sadly I hear— Perhaps, because ‘tis on the mountain’s peak He cries so… |
Lord Masahira
45
Right (Win)
ゆふまぐれ霧のまがきのさびしさにをしか鳴くなり秋の山里
| yūmagure kiri no magaki no sabishisa ni oshika nakunari aki no yamazato | Tangled in twilight With mist around my brushwood fence, Loneliness fills me, as A stag bells, by A mountain retreat in autumn |
Shinkaku
46
What on earth is the conception of ‘sadly hearing something in the skies’? While no one can truly know why a stag bells, what is the point of saying that ‘sadness is in the skies’? And if one does hear it, it isn’t the case that anyone really knows that the stag is belling out of longing for his mate, is it. The stag seeming to bell by a brushwood fence in the mist, seems to sound a bit more moving at the moment.



